All right I so need someone to help me out on my short story! I have no clue what I am doing! I have never tryed to write somthing that that takes up that much paper(becieds school) and I am feeling it. That and the fact that I suck at spelling, need help! 

hey everybody. i just joined this circle and just wanted to say a quick hi. i'm working a short story, and i was hoping to get some feedback on it. if you guys want, check it out. I actually posted 2 parts of it, but i don't really know how to put it together yet, or how it's gonna end, but I would appreciate some comments or critiques. thanks, racheal 

Thats great, that is also why I am in this circle. I have so many pieces that havent seen the light of day(or computer) and they are doing me no good hidding. 

 I joined this circle because I have a bunch of (years-old) pieces, like haikus, poems and essays about nothing and everything and stupid things and serious things, and they'll be here because I don't know what else to do with them. I haven't written poetry in years, and reading it doesn't do much for me either. They're just sitting under my bed in boxes, and I guess they'll be better off living here than forgotten under my bed, being enjoyed by someone else, if not me.