This is something I have been working on for a while now. Its for a couple soldiers I have adopted through a program. I feel like i need to thank them with more than a simple, "thanks for what you do." This is what I have come up with for n... » Read...

It's a little confusing. Even to me.

I was up late one night and wrote it without editing except spell and grammar checks.

Everything in it is still being figured out by me. » Read...

poem

It's just me deciding one day that things are going to change. For better or worse I deserve a change. » Read...

...at least it is not about war? » Read...

Déjà vu...hauting. It causes you to feel something you've felt before.

PLEASE READ! » Read...

» Read...

A poem of confusion and anguish written in a moment of despair. » Read...

» Read...

A poetic representation of American society and culture. » Read...

This is a poem about new love. When you enter into a new relationship with someone you think is wonderful and they return your feelings.
ALL my poems are inspired by my late husband, the Love-of-my-life. » Read...

I'm shooting for a literary short story with this I want to eventually send it out to magazines, so your feedback about minor details or overall tone and word usage would be greatly appreciated. You should tell me if I'm being over(t)ly flash... » Read...

sestina » Read...

A poem. A personal piece for me. I wrote this at a time when I felt empty and alone. I would appreciate some feed back .Thank you » Read...

What is a person to do when just existing becomes a chore? » Read...

a poem about losing love. » Read...

A humorous tale of a station porter who is fond of mangoes. » Read...

» Read...

A poem I wrote during a messy breakup I just couldn't drop » Read...

WARNING: MAY BE DISTURBING TO SOME READERS.

Andre deals with a pedophile.

This chapter is slightly tweaked following an editor & a publishers' recommendations (from the writer's conference). » Read...

This work gives bonus coins for critiques.

Horatius is introduced, and he's happiest in his playground...

MAY BE DISTURBING TO SOME READERS. » Read...

This work gives bonus coins for critiques.

Everyone at least one point in their lives, have been both of the people in this poem. » Read...

A character-study into a few moments in a goldfish's life. A Kafkaesque piece. » Read...

This is a short story I wrote almost 2 years ago now for a creative writing class. » Read...

A freeverse poem about the confines of the human spirit. Let me know what you think. » Read...

it's a poem: inspirational » Read...

Mia Caldwel is a hard working teenager who doesn't have much time for a social life. Then while working at the bookstore, she meets a handsome mysterious guy named Tristan. » Read...

A poem I wrote last week. It just came to me. » Read...

A beautiful creature is trapped in the jaws of a horrible beast. Hidden message. What is the monster? Who is the creature? » Read...

Have you ever sat at a table, bus stop, or anywhere for that matter, and people sit beside you and you can feel their negative energy start to drain you? Well, that's what this poem is about. It's also about finding the spiritual element in l... » Read...

A blog entry for an issue personal to me. » Read...

A very short bit of poetry. Nothing fancy. Read it if you like. I could care less. :) *I can't resist an opportunity to be ironic* » Read...

What does it mean to live forever? (Formerly titled: Eternal Sunset) » Read...

This work gives bonus coins for critiques.

written in a state of emotional confusion » Read...

Loss of innocence through lost love, young adult content » Read...

How better to describe the torment of loving someone? » Read...

Inspirational, philosophical ramblings, stream of consciousness » Read...

A childhood memory cements the bond between a dying man and his sister. » Read...

» Read...

This short story was one of my first to win a contest. It is written in the first person from the perspective of an abused child. » Read...

Here's a *rough* draft of the prologue for my new novel, Iron Arcadia. I intend, basically, to belt this novel out before spending too much time revising, so the best critiques are those that address more global issues about the text. » Read...

This work gives bonus karma points for critiques.

This is one of my first stabs at poetry. The piece is incomplete, so it ends rather abruptly. I intend for it to be a short story of sorts, but right now it is just a long poem. Any feedback is warm welcomed. » Read...

Intro to Suviana and Ariza. Suviana gets several surprises. Raiders attack. Arrio comes and Ariza is reunited with Kell... » Read...

This work gives bonus karma points for critiques.

A shark seeks immortality. Warnings: moderate blood, violence » Read...

This was inspired by my trip to Northern Michigan that I go on every August. » Read...

A personal narrative about how I chose life over existence. » Read...

A song I wrote about how there are times when I wish I was a singer or part of a band or something like that, but I know it will never happen » Read...